Sunday, 3 July 2011

My story

My story:
Air rushed through her fur as she and her pack raced through the trees. She could smell the pine and the musky earth, plus a hundred different smells ranging from deer pee to the sweet, perfume of wild roses. Her pack brushed against her body as they sprinted after their prey. They chased a vile smell, of death and rotten flesh.  She could see them now, they were running as hard as they could. Their pale skin like white paint, they moved like no other creature, it was like they were walking but their arms and legs were moving at lightening speed. Lexie`s muscles moved as one to make the perfect vampire killing machine. They were gaining on the vampires fast and easily.  Let’s pick up the speed. I want this over and fast…Lexie thought, sending a message telepathically out to the rest of the pack. They instantly picked up speed effortlessly and were soon on the vampire`s heels. Lexie sprang, her claws sinking into the closest vampire`s clothes and flesh, taking it down.  She sunk her razor sharp teeth into it's neck, a foul taste burned the back of her throat as the blood oozed into her mouth. She growled, without letting go of her pray she ripped off its head and threw it over her shoulder.

2 comments:

  1. We think that you have a extremely good way of writing.From the start it gives the true feeling and gives a lot of information to the reader drawing them into the story. Keep it up!
    Nan & Grandad

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  2. Very good although the material is not my normal reading I found it did draw you in and left you wanting to know more. You are very talented.

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